Blog Post #3

Sad Smile
By: Aimee

Sad smile
Face of a sad angel
Joy in his eyes where gone
Don’t cry
We mustn't give up hope
A smile would linger
My mind was empty
For there is no time to think
Snow continued to fall
Days went by
and tears, 
Flowed from his eyes
Stop crying
I’ll return as soon as possible

Wait for me

Comments

  1. Great poem! I really liked your overall theme. I liked how in the beginning he was trying to fight through the sadness, and also how he was trying not to give up hope. Nearing the end of your poem I liked how he started to become more positive.

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